professorlamp's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The hard maze game]

1. The game is too hard, straight away you're plummeted into a massive spiral which is a bit glitchy at the best of times. Maybe think of having a healthbar or checkpoints just so that it's not just a 'YOU LOSE' scenario.
2. the instructions screen froze for me for a brief moment and then finally displayed the back button after about 30 seconds.
3. Play through the game yourself and make sure all areas of it are fully working, there was a point where I was clearly in the white and yet I still died.

I know this seems a bit critical (especially to an 11 year-old) but the more you absorb the criticism, the better you'll get and the more thick skinned you'll become.

You could also try adding some public domain music aswell.

Good luck!

defenclesscookie responds:

This game is supposed to be hard... anyway i did play through it five times and i went in instructions and other places, everything was fine for me.... not sure. As for the music, checkpoints, health and other stuff, as said in the description this is a test, not a perfection. I will add more stuff to the game in time. Thanks for the ideas though, i will propably make a better version with more levels!